You should make sure that other people know about your strengths and accomplishments in order to be successful in the future.
People often possess different perspectives on whether a person should make sure that other people know about his or her strengths and accomplishments in order to be successful in the future. As of me, I strongly agree with this statement. Following are some examples for whom a person should present its background.
First of all, a university cares about a candidate’s strengths and accomplishments, this is because they want to choose the best students among all candidates. Take my university program, financial and international business for example, during my interview, the professor was exciting about my interest on stock market so he asked me a lot of questions about it. After the interview, he told me that a student who is interested in financial market is the student he definitely hopes to enroll. At last, I did get the offer from the program. Apparently, I get the offer by showing my strength in financial market.
Secondly, a business manager places emphasis on a candidate’s strengths and accomplishments. Take my friend Mike for example, he applied for the job as an associate lawyer in the top legal firm of Manhattan, New York. There is something special about Mike, he possesses a photographic memory and can comprehend and recall every legal case and clause that has pretty much ever existed. He used this strength during his interview and he beat all the other candidates. He secured the job and in fact, he also got a ten thousand dollars check as his signing bonus. It is certainly clear to see why a person has to show his strength.
In conclusion, I really think a person should definitely show his or her advantages to others because by doing so, will get a nice school offer or an incredible job opportunity.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-08-20 | KevinLiu0708 | 76 | view |
- You should make sure that other people know about your strengths and accomplishments in order to be successful in the future 76
- The best way for a government to solve the air pollution is raising gas prices Do you agree or disagree 70
- A university wants to improve the quality of life for students who reside in a dormitory on campus Which ONE of the following things do you think the university should spend money on for this purpose and why 1 Providing a room for quiet study 2 Building a 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93243243243 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03253450471 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.406700817 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200148316024 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664060200797 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128119619108 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143943839778 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146133103989 0.0645574589148 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.