The given bar chart gives information about Australian people's habit of buying and drinking beverages in five cities.
Overall, it can be seen that people in almost every city, except Adelaide, preferred going to the cafe for tea or coffee rather than buying it in the last month. The largest number of people going to the cafe was in Melbourne, with the percentage of about 63 while the number of people buying fresh and instant coffee was highest in Sydney and Hobart respectively with the percentage of about 43 and 54.
Over 60 percent people in Sydney went to the cafe to have their beverages whereas those buying fresh and coffee was almost the same, revolving around 45 percent. Instant coffee was the choice of approximately 42 percent people in Melbourne; the figure was above 47% for those buying fresh coffee.
Almost same number of people bought fresh coffee in the last four weeks in Brisbane and Adelaide, with the percentage of just below 35. Those opting instant coffee were around 52% in Brisbane and 50% in Adelaide.
Lastly, in Hobart, around 38% of people chose fresh coffee and around 62 percent went cafe for their coffee or tea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84924623116 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28977060378 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492462311558 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.19955752 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205763303345 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10980999751 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842142110942 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143704197481 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929446850546 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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