Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that these entertainments are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Nowadays, video games have currently impacted the life of human race and created an era of electronic addicts. However, a minority of indivisuals in the socielty believe that these entertainments make a negligible impact on the society. To my perspective, I strongly agree with this first side of given notion and this essay will give my opinion regarding it.
On the one hand, video games stil play an essential part in developing the industrial era of 4.0. For instance, start-up people tend to choose designing games or online entertainment to make a fortune and develop their career. Likewise, games also help young users increase mind-creativity and sensitive response. Hence, those could be taken as examples for the gamers whenever they want to open their own business and make profits.
On the other hand, the fact that video games and visual entertainments are making a substantial influence on every indivisuals participants in colleges and shcools. In particularly, studens who lack of full awareness may get addicted to computer games. As a result, their perseverance and deligence are decreased while study due to the psychological effect of video games on the mind of youngsters.
In conclusion, every indivisual living in the current society can feel the disavantages of video games and they also bring along the definite drawacks to be concerned. It can distracting people’s attention on the present activities and make a plethora of mental effect on the mind human race.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to design'.
Suggestion: to design
...nstance, start-up people tend to choose designing games or online entertainment to make a...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... entertainments are making a substantial influence on every indivisuals participa...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'distract'
Suggestion: distract
...finite drawacks to be concerned. It can distracting people’s attention on the present activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, likewise, may, regarding, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22916666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01647962127 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.456801997 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260472893695 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876895031281 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567966861861 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14647366652 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022398775533 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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