Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I strongly believe that these days people have more convenient and comfortable lives in comparison to the past because not only have a lot of practical technologies developed, but also progress of internet have created a tremendous change in people's lives.
One of the primary causes is that by the passage of time people have acquired a lot of achievements in different fields, and these accomplishments help them to have a much easier life. Firstly, people have much healthier life in comparison to the past. In fact, a lot people were killed in the past by various diseases that were unknown, or people may not cure them. For example, some simple diseases such as diarrhea was a striking threat to people, but these days people find some shrewd cures to remedy of various diseases. Secondly, as time goes on, a lot of tools and means developed, and these tools enhance people's lives. For instance, people in the past wasted a lot of time and energy to irrigate or harvest their crops, but nowadays people invent a lot machines that help to have an easy agriculture. Then, they can save their time and their energies. Similarly, these days people have more comfortable transportation in comparison to the past. In the past lives people did not have developed transportation means, but these days super-fast airplanes and trains ease communication and transportation of people.
But there is a further more subtle point we must consider. As time goes on, internet has created a lot facilities for people. On one hand, these days people do a lot works by the help of internet, and they do not need to waste their time doing these works physically. For instance, people do several works in their homes, and they do not need to waste energy or time doing these works. For instance, people can buy everything that they need easily. In fact, they search on internet by some key words, and they can compare different goods and have easy purchases. On the other hand, internet gives people to have a lot funs, and they can use these entertainments and amusements to have a more desirable life. For example, people can communicate with each other, when they are far from each other by the use of video calls. Then, they do not need to waste a lot of time and money to visit each other. Similarly, they can use a lot of entertainments to amuse themselves. For instance, they can play some video games, watch some online videos and etc. Therefore, people can enjoy these amusements to have some pleasant leisure times.
All in all, both development of different technologies and striking progress of internet help people to have comfortable lives in comparison to their grandparents and their ancestors. It is highly predicted that by the passage of time comfort and welfare of people's lives would increase, and people would use them to have a more favorable life subsequently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: KEY_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keywords'?
Suggestion: keywords
...n fact, they search on internet by some key words, and they can compare different goods a...
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Line 5, column 1040, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...e video games, watch some online videos and etc. Therefore, people can enjoy these amuse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2390.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85772357724 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71886195393 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.39837398374 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8691596445 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766316947555 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306188025937 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276230647839 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564842842216 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199354282199 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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