Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this opinion?
Many people argue that anyone who receives health care should pay for it irrespective of their living condition. It is also true that health is one of the most important things in each person’s life; therefore, each should be responsible for their own health. I agree with this point of view because of the following reasons.
First of all, the main reason why healthcare should not be free is that not many governments can afford to pay for everyone’s treatment as well as researching, importing medicines, constructing hospitals and paying salaries for medical staff. This will lead to the second reason, medical staff will get low income which makes it difficult for them to get on in this expensive society. It cannot attract excellent students to pursue their career as doctors or nurses. Lack of medical staff will be a challenge for the society especially when the pandemic occurs.
It is true that people should be held for their own health. Of course they should be aware of their body so that they can adjust the way they eat, do exercises or sleep. Moreover, people should self educate to increase knowledge, always update about new viruses or diseases and the method to protect themselves from being infected. In the worst case when they are infected, they will know how to take care of their health.
In conclusion, healthcare should not be free of charge for each individual when they are taken care of. Not only does it sustain the medical industry, but it also improves medical conditions in treatment. Having good health means having everything. That is why people should care for their health more and more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o receives health care should pay for it irrespective of their living condition. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, of course, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90252707581 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52680761857 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9528571405 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444249950999 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148893619899 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106140564378 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270633944327 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538579006282 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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