Many Offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problems.
It is alarming that ex-convicts are inclined to commit more crimes after being released from prison. This essay will examine the root causes and propose some ultimate solutions to address the issue.
To begin with, there are several factors attributed to the fact that people with past criminal records tend to recommit a crime, of which discrimination from the public and incomplete rehabilitation programmes introduced by governments are the chief causes. First and foremost, societal discrimination against ex-offenders might hinder them from being recruited, resulting in unemployment. Should those people fail to be employed, they might earn a living illegally such as being an identity fraud that might be remanded in custody. Another contributor to the given issue is the incomplete social reintegration programmes released by governments. Take Vietnam as a prime example, different rehabilitation initiatives are being imposed without raising the public’s awareness of cooperation with the government in helping ex-convicts, which, in turn, makes them isolated and feel useless. As a result, they might commit a crime for the second time.
Counselling ex-convicts before re-entering society is inextricably intertwined with fostering a consciousness of assisting ex-offenders among the public to alleviate the given issue. Regarding the former matter, those with past records of crime might be attending various seminars on unanticipated problems that might occur outside the prison, which will provide them with some ideas to avoid culture shock or pessimistic attitudes towards life. Additionally, it is of paramount importance for the government to raise people's awareness of helping ex-offenders rehabilitate. For instance, those who have an extraordinary willingness to help offenders re-enter society might receive greater health insurance or other benefits package. With the collaboration from the public, ex-offenders might find it easier and motivated to steer clear of crime commitment.
In conclusion, various factors provoke citizens with past criminal records to recommit more crime; however, both governments and individuals can take actions to prevent it from exacerbating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8722741433 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15877711869 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4292468723 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.642857143 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149203175787 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577461184466 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443104501227 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105948099171 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459286073424 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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