The line graph compares the highest temperatures during diffirent seasons in 5 Australian cities.
Overall,it is clear that the average scale of temperatures in the 5 cities varies between 34 to 15 degrees Celcius at their peak points in 2007.
Firstly, we can easily tell from the graph that Darwin was the hottest place among all of the 5 places, with average temperature of 34 degrees Celsius during summer. In addition, Darwin recorded the smallest decrease between seasons, as the temperature from summer to autumn fell only by 1 degree.
Cairns and perth were the next warmest Australian cities. However, Perth was significantly cooler than Cairns in autumn and winter, dropping dramatically from 24 to 19 degrees in winter.
As for the remaining two regions, Sydney and Adelaide, which shared closely similar temperatures with only 1 degree differance. But in winter, Adelaide was considered to be cooler than Sydney and the coolesr city in the graph. Moreover, Sydney, Adelaide and Perth had almost the same temperatures during spring time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...easons in 5 Australian cities. Overall,it is clear that the average scale of temp...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...that Darwin was the hottest place among all of the 5 places, with average temperature of 3...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73841141859 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8452929758 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2222222222 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217324695808 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875516812521 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794328361046 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124458227161 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078259066395 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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