In certain countries, the number of people who use bicycles as the main means of transport is reducing even though it is beneficial both physically and environmentally. What can be the reasons for this change in preference? How can people be encouraged to use bicycles?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that cycling has many physical and environmental benefits, but it's use has declined in some countries. This essay will discuss about this change in preference along with ways to get back people on the cycles.
One of key causes of this change might be due to the fact that roads may not be well-suited for riding a bicycle smoothly, especially during rainy seasons. Apart from this, riding a cycle requires enough time and energy. Nowadays, people are always in a rush and want to reach their destination as quickly as possible, and cycling doesn't really serve the purpose. Additionally, this activity requires some amount of physical effort, which people are too lazy to invest.
In order to overcome all such difficulties there a few solutions that could be followed to encourage people to use bicycles as a means of transport. First and foremost, the government should take necessary steps to reconstruct roads and lanes that get damaged during rainy seasons so that they are suitable for cyclers. Also, it is important to spread awarness among people about the health benefits of cycling. Furthermore, there exists an upside to the nature because carbon emissions are totally eliminated which in turn will result in lesser air and noise pollution. For instance, an experiment was conducted at university of Netherlands, where a certain city opted for cycling for a whole month as the only means of transport, which resulted in 40 percent reduction of pollutants in the air.
In conclusion, the remedies might seem quite extensive and time-consuming to implement, but will definitely help tackle the problem of reduced usage of bicycles among citizens in long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ion as quickly as possible, and cycling doesnt really serve the purpose. Additionally,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09386281588 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74768850591 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638989169675 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1862889764 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26088626349 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833343847646 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646843418301 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135542451743 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565065054394 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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