The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, nuclear weapon are now very useful for a lot of fields due to the development of technology. Using nuclear weapon to threat other countries, which help the world become peace till this day. It also help the economic and product electricity. This essay will discuss that, in my opinion these advantages are better là the drawbacks.
The biggest problem associated with nuclear technology is that, if there are any faulty handling can cause serious outcomes such as dead of citizens and air pollution. For example, the nuclear incident that occurred in the Boston University had hardly effects on the people working there at that time. Seriously, they need to be handled really careful.
Despite that, If people can use nuclear weapons for good things can bring to us lots of benefit that cannot be ignored. The most advantage is using the energy of nuclear weapons for electricity production and economical. This has reduced the dependency on fossil fuels, which are non-renewable sources and produce awful gases. More likely, The evolvement of nuclear isotope in the field medicine has saved many people having cancer. Regarding such dangerous actions, people had using those indisputable that the limitations of nuclear weapons overshadowed own benefits.
Meanwhile, nuclear technology could also be dangerous to the nation as it poses a danger to the communities. This could cause air pollution and blast resulting in sickness and having a negative impact on the environment.
In conclusion, I would say there are lots of merits to nuclear weapons compared to their demerits. As it product electric and provides cheap, clean power for the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, regarding, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23880597015 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68541642022 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.935002592 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.75 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296979302588 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090737001542 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809813425776 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15727719019 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794645911981 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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