Crimes negatively affect public life. In some countries, it is increasingly common for the youth to commit crimes. Nevertheless, attention scarcity and financial problems that make them do it can be solved by government support.
Nowadays, some children are determined to commit crimes due to lack of attention from their families. This is because their parents are occupied and spend a little time with their teenage children, who become youth offenders committing crimes like vandalism or arson. A good idea is to implement more extra-curricular activities in order to occupy them. When children are involved in doing something new, their focus shifts from their problems to absorbing new knowledge. Therefore, not only would they behave well, they would also have their horizon broadened. Moreover, these activities would assist them in choosing their career path.
Furthermore , sometimes teenagers defy laws for their personal gain. Teenagers struggle to earn money to buy commodities they want and so it is easier for some of them to commit thefts or robbery which allow them to afford things without working hard. The measure that can be taken by the government is to provide poor families with financial support. This would allow poor teenagers to purchase basic goods to make them content.
In conclusion, it is true that the lack of attention and finances are the most frequent reasons for young criminals to commit crimes. However, it can be prevented by providing teenagers with pocket money and things to keep them busy. The best way to stop crimes from happening is preventing it before it occurs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23846153846 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68664620854 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4382715965 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16790781377 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555693885607 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532595186883 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102962598584 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185667329861 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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