There is no denying the fact that children nowadays have a high incidence of stress to gain the best score in academics. Those of them who score high grades in academics are more likely to have a successful career in the future.However, most schools include both academic and non-academic subjects in the sillabus so that many parents and teachers believe that non-academic subjects should be removed from the school curriculum.
To begin with, non-academic activities mean having some relaxation through doing sports, dancing, jumping and playing mobile games. In fact, it help students to concentrate more on academic subjects and, of course, improve their health. For example, regularly physically active students are active in general. They feel strong themselves and set to achieve any goals.
In addition, these physical activities play in significant role in enhancing children's talents and essential skills like cookery or learning how to survive. Obviously, sport and physical education provide children the knowledge of working in team, setting goals or acquiring the discipline. For example, cub scout summer schools or role-playing, which improve communication skills and teamwork spirit.
In conclusion, I am convinced that non-academic subjects are crucially important for children's development and necessary to future healthy physically active generations. After all, we need not only scientists or writers, the world requires strong athletes, actors, cookers, and many other professionals as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... have a successful career in the future.However, most schools include both academic and...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...g and playing mobile games. In fact, it help students to concentrate more on academi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, after all, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in general, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74778761062 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97682396698 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690265486726 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5812529688 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.090909091 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268555996249 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801338808549 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835276041706 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143835073598 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696494527029 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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