Art - the word in itself is strongly subjective, and is of various forms. It is a combination of films, novels, songs, poems, painting or dancing. Among these there might be arts contributed by the hardwork, resilience and determination of a single person or multiple people might be involved. Thus, putting the merit solely on the number of people who understood the art is unfair.
I would support my opinion by presenting a few examples. Let's say for an instance that there is a film produced on the struggles of Africans dating a few decades back. There might be a large pool of people who might not feel connected to the movie as times have changed. They might feel it is too irrelavant or out of context as we don't see those things happening now. Not only this, people of Africa themselves might not be able to connect with it completely. That being said, it doesn't necessarily make the movie a dull one. It might have great content, actors, sounds and effects and still fail to impress people.
In today's fast paced world, every individual have personalised choices. Thus, a movie made on Jane Austen's book might not do so well as people might feel it is too slow. There might be a feeling among larger section of the audience that, there is no spark in their chemistry or would be unable to comprehend how people might fall in love that way. Though the writer in her time have been renowned world wide. Classic novel readers of today's times also appreciate and draw inspiration from her books. She has set global standards for classic writers around the world even today.
Though I agree that people might feel other way about this topic. There might be a larger pool of people believing that if the art isn't comprehensible how will we understand the purpose behind it. If purpose of the art is unknown, it won't be possible for the audience to express their opinion. This is a common opinion that even if the art is a master piece and it is abstruce it won't be doing well. Though going back in time tells us masterpiece arts have always found their way to the top, it might have taken several years or maybe was recognised after the death of the artist. But a masterpiece has always stood up in the race of time. As time is the best indicator for the validity of any art.
Thus, I would like to conclude by saying that there are several factors which needs to be considered for deciding the merit of the art and not just how much it is understandable to the audience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53794642857 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45867224755 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533482142857 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5844320938 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.32 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.92 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184656367583 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536312642952 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427923796219 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117197763226 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364874989193 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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