Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Nowadays, the technology development influenced almost our life. Especially, it affects teenager. They approached much modern equipment such as computers, smartphone, ... This equipment helps students to study very good but almost children usually use it to play games.
In my opinion, playing games have lots of advantages. They help student to improve memory. According to research of scientist that the children play games about 1 to 2 hours a day smarter than other children. Second, playing games also increase creativity and do teamwork. Through playing games such as battle games demand children who must do teamwork together. Moreover, playing games expand thought help them to study better than. Therefore, many programs about learning to combine many types of different games. Third, playing games increase reflex. For example, if player would like to win a game, player have to know observed, prediction in order to find solutions most quickly.
Besides, playing games also affect bad health of children. They can be decrease eyesight and cause sleeplessness. Especially, these children become addicted games. Consequence is they will drop out of school. The society has many evils. For instance, they can steal money when they don't have money to play games. Furthermore, they will join in bad group. Therefore, their parents care about their emotion. Teenager should join in good clubs such as piano club, sport club, ... I think we can play game but do not play over 180 seconds.
In conclusion, playing games not only have many advantages but also have some disadvantages. It depends on aware of people about so that we can educate children to use them right purpose.
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- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25650557621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6132183762 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7728539359 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.56 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.76 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282274220679 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823554362866 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728473084725 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169235412202 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783999891495 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.04 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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