The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

The line graph compares statistics on the release of acid rain from four diverse sectors in the United Kingdom over a period of 17 years from 1990.
It is clear that the gross amount of acid rain emissions that came from all forms of category witnessed a drop throughout the given period. However, a dramatic decline was seen in the electricity, gas, and water supply.
In 1990, the figure for rain acid emissions caused by the electricity, gas, and water sector had the highest rate of emissions, at just under 3.5 million tonnes. However, this figure was 1.5 million tonnes higher than emissions from other industries. The transport and communication sector produced a rather similar amount of acid rain to the domestic one, at around 0.7 and 0.6 million tonnes respectively.
By 2007, acid rain emitted by electricity, gas, and water supply had been in a downturn by about 3 million tonnes. Whereas there was a moderate decrease of 1.5 million tonnes in the other industries sector, there were no significant changes in the release of acid rain from the transport and communication category. Besides, emissions from the domestic sector reduced steadily and hit a low of approximately 0.25 million tonnes between 2005 and 2007.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'industries'' or 'industry's'?
Suggestion: industries'; industry's
...ease of 1.5 million tonnes in the other industries sector, there were no significant chang...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01463414634 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69684196301 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4149999608 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.222222222 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420536950612 0.215688989381 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17499329145 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766146987843 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253516967181 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870714590183 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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