Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.
It is true that nowadays plenty of people change their place of residence and settle abroad. It is considered by some individuals that resettlement is an advantage for children; while others claim that it is difficult for them to immigrate. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument then I will give my own opinion.
On one side of the argument, there are those who claim that immigration to a foreign country is beneficial for children. This is because moving to another country demands a child to learn a new language, which is beneficial for the development of the brain in terms of neuroplasticity. In addition, it is known that a bilingual person has a number of advantages in comparison with a person who speaks only a single language. Thus, youngsters learning a foreign language improves their memory and enhances their decision-making ability, as well as their multitasking ability. Studies show that the benefits of learning a new language include higher scores on standardized exams in math, reading comprehension, and vocabulary by multilingual students compared to the scores of monolingual students.
On the contrary, opponents may argue that moving abroad will bring the youth to a totally different environment: a new school or a kindergarten, requirement to study a foreign language, lack of friends, a new house, and changed behavior of the parents due to the adaptation process. It goes without saying that a child will probably struggle with establishing connections with peers because of different cultural backgrounds and misunderstandings. In addition, overall performance in a school declines as a child will not understand a specific subject language. As a result, the youngsters may feel left behind and overwhelmed by the circumstances and parents may not be able to resolve them effectively.
In conclusion, I think that both sides have their arguments. On balance, however, I believe that the positive consequences of immigration significantly outweigh the negative ones. Moreover, any upcoming difficulties can be solved and it just demands some readiness from parents and from children as well.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31085043988 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25962544204 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563049853372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3792155556 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.733333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223877200137 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645998634409 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672209866312 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127698595622 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569030297831 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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