The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992

The pie chart sheds light on different types of jobs done by people in the Great Britain in 1992.

Majority of the males and females were employed in the Managerial and professional jobs. Lowest amount of employs were in the General Labourers Category. The same amount of men are employed in both Clerical or related fields and other non-manual field's.

In 1992 male's were 7 percent more in the Managerial and professional jobs as compared to female's, but in contrast there were 25 percent less male in the clerical or related fields. Around 31 percent of females were doing some sort of manual job's in 1992 Great Britain. On the other hand more than half of male's were employed in manual jobs. In the other manual category male and female employs have a difference of mere 1 percent. The same amount of men are employed in both Clerical or related fields and other non-manual field's. Almost 69 percent of the female population works in some or the other Non-manual jobs.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Lowest'.
Suggestion: The Lowest
...n the Managerial and professional jobs. Lowest amount of employs were in the General L...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in contrast, sort of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75294117647 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4390139252 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464705882353 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.029985015 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176026030099 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087508236006 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794467731529 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160632235939 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862342072356 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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