Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom Do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... role in anyone life to pass it happily.Few individuals believe that at present pup...
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...present pupils have too much liberation.I strongly agree with this statement as t...
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Suggestion: , children
...rding to their choice. To commence with,children use new electronic gadgets.They use mod...
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...ith,children use new electronic gadgets.They use modern techniques for their enterta...
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Suggestion: Resultantly
... their parents give freedom to use them.Resultantly,kids can pester to their procreator to ...
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...nts give freedom to use them.Resultantly,kids can pester to their procreator to buy e...
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...heir procreator to buy expensive things.In addition to this, they can wear clothes...
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...s, they can wear clothes that they want.When kids have freedom to wear anything,they...
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....When kids have freedom to wear anything,they can wear western dresses.To exemplify, ...
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... anything,they can wear western dresses.To exemplify, today most of children try n...
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Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...ear western dresses.To exemplify, today most of children try new garments like top and jeans. M...
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...ents like top and jeans. Moving further,educators have more choices in education system. ...
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...s in education system. As they have too much privileges they can choose subject in t...
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...in their study that they want.eventually,they can enhance their knowledge.Moreover,th...
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...tually,they can enhance their knowledge.Moreover,they can do marriage according to their...
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...hey can enhance their knowledge.Moreover,they can do marriage according to their desi...
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...ey can do wedding with their loved ones.To epitome, modern children do marriage wh...
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...rn children do marriage where they want.So,how children have not too much freedom ...
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... children do marriage where they want.So,how children have not too much freedom if t...
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...ve a right to take their own decision? However some people counterclaim that in some a...
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...n some areas girls do not work at night.Individuals do not allow women to do job at late ni...
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...e night and they have no freedom as men.Consequently,girls do not enjoy their life.What is m...
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...they have no freedom as men.Consequently,girls do not enjoy their life.What is more,in...
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...sequently,girls do not enjoy their life.What is more,in some religions girls are mar...
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...rls do not enjoy their life.What is more,in some religions girls are married at ear...
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...religions girls are married at early age,they are not get pleasure in their lives.To ...
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...hey are not get pleasure in their lives.To cute an example ,in Bihar girls marriag...
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...easure in their lives.To cute an example ,in Bihar girls marriage doing in early s...
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... early stage. Recapitulate, undoubtedly,everyone should have liberation to enjoy their e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48014440433 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5772001928 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.734199454 49.4020404114 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.857142857 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5714285714 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234261623716 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112248475819 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591986205753 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141484756279 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485666146668 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.0946893788 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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