The chart below gives information about car ownership in UK from 1975 to 2005

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The chart below gives information about car ownership in UK from 1975 to 2005.

The provided line graph depicts the data about car authority in United Kingdom between 1975 and 2005.The data has been calibrated into percentage.
Overall, it is clearly seen that car ownership of one car increased gradually,whereas no car authority was reached at the nadir during the time period.
Now looking at the details, from 1975 to 1985,in United Kingdom, takeover of one car was decreased significantly,which came to nearly 37%.Meanwhile, authority of no car declined dramatically,which started at approximately 44% and ended at 25%. When the ownership of two cars upsurge gradually,which registered to 15%,moderate increase was observed in takeover of 3 cars during the time period that was reached at nearly 5%.
Probing ahead, between 1985 and 2005, one car was purchased by british people was escalate considerably,which reached at peak point.However,authority of no car in UK was almost constant from1985 to 1995,was almost 25%,which dwindled in 2005 was 23%.In addition to this,the ownership of two and three cars were narrow fluctuated from 1985 to 2005,came to nearly 20%,10% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...in United Kingdom between 1975 and 2005.The data has been calibrated into percentag...
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Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whereas
...ownership of one car increased gradually,whereas no car authority was reached at the nad...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...r of one car was decreased significantly,which came to nearly 37%.Meanwhile, authority...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
... significantly,which came to nearly 37%.Meanwhile, authority of no car declined dramatica...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...uthority of no car declined dramatically,which started at approximately 44% and ended ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... ownership of two cars upsurge gradually,which registered to 15%,moderate increase was...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...british people was escalate considerably,which reached at peak point.However,authority...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...onsiderably,which reached at peak point.However,authority of no car in UK was almost co...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , authority
...ably,which reached at peak point.However,authority of no car in UK was almost constant fro...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...most 25%,which dwindled in 2005 was 23%.In addition to this,the ownership of two a...
^^
Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...dled in 2005 was 23%.In addition to this,the ownership of two and three cars were na...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51461988304 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67110823446 2.65546596893 138% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.9668119236 43.030603864 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.6 112.824112599 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221188612062 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13319087609 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283186770907 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147824659313 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164106308675 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.2329268293 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...in United Kingdom between 1975 and 2005.The data has been calibrated into percentag...
^^^
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whereas
...ownership of one car increased gradually,whereas no car authority was reached at the nad...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...r of one car was decreased significantly,which came to nearly 37%.Meanwhile, authority...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
... significantly,which came to nearly 37%.Meanwhile, authority of no car declined dramatica...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...uthority of no car declined dramatically,which started at approximately 44% and ended ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... ownership of two cars upsurge gradually,which registered to 15%,moderate increase was...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...british people was escalate considerably,which reached at peak point.However,authority...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...onsiderably,which reached at peak point.However,authority of no car in UK was almost co...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , authority
...ably,which reached at peak point.However,authority of no car in UK was almost constant fro...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...most 25%,which dwindled in 2005 was 23%.In addition to this,the ownership of two a...
^^
Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...dled in 2005 was 23%.In addition to this,the ownership of two and three cars were na...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51461988304 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67110823446 2.65546596893 138% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.9668119236 43.030603864 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.6 112.824112599 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221188612062 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13319087609 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283186770907 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147824659313 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164106308675 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.2329268293 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.