Now a days, variety of vehicals are available in market for human and car is one of them. I believe that the utility of can neither be decreased or replaced with any other vehical. Thus, twenty years in future the number of car will not decline. However, the type of car can be changed such as from petro or desiel engine car to electric car or car which can run on ethenol.
For humans cars are essention form of transport, since it saves lot of time and it provides privacy. For example, a person uses public transport to reach his office on normal day, if he is running late for the office he wont take the bus instead he will use his own car beacuse the public transport have the predefined route to follow. To save time we need our own vehical and for that reason number of cars can not go down.
Moreover, cars are used in many services such as cabs and texies. This services provides employment to many people. Many people are relocating to urban areas in order to have better lifestyle and employment, and the cab services will be used by middle class people who can not afford car. The utility of these services will rise in nearer future will be the result of urbanization. Not only this but cars are considered to be the status symbol in the society, and to increase the status people will buy cars.
However, the government can impose restrictions on cars because of the global worming effects and also people do care about nature thus, this might lead to fall in car numbers. There are numerous research has been done and various alternative cars have been developed that are pollution free such as ethenol cars and electric cars. So, in next twenty years conventional cars can be replced with new cars but the number of cars won't go down.
A myriad of reasons discussed above shows how the number of car rather increase instead of going down in next twenty years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, variety of vehicals are available in m...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, variety of vehicals are available in m...
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Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: NEITHER_NOR[1]
Message: Use 'nor' with neither.
Suggestion: nor
...the utility of can neither be decreased or replaced with any other vehical. Thus, ...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s can not go down. Moreover, cars are used in many services such as cabs and t...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'provide'.
Suggestion: provide
... such as cabs and texies. This services provides employment to many people. Many people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54252199413 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29192347203 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530791788856 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8871234322 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8125 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235166072919 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851465560512 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478721917679 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131418066673 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296563129558 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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