Some people claim that our grandparents’ lives were easier when they were children because they didn’t have to stress about school or live in an ultra-competitive environment. However, in my opinion, I believe that life today is much easier for the following three reasons.
First of all, life today is much simpler than in the past when our grandparents were children because we have significantly more luxury products. For example, it is not uncommon for a child in today’s world to have an extremely comfortable and luxurious bed that they sleep on each night. In contrast, most of our grandparents, mine included, slept on hard concrete. Undoubtedly, luxury items make our lives more comfortable and easier. In the past, these luxury products were limited to only the very rich, meaning that the vast majority of people have to go through life suffering. But today a kid can enjoy luxury items that were not available even to kings in the past.
Secondly, children in modern times have more comfortable lives due to their increased access to technology. For instance, kids these days often have cell phones, iPads, computers, and electronic bicycles. Our grandparents only had sticks and dirt to play with. With technology, kids do not have to engage in strenuous labor or worry about tedious tasks that have to be completed.
Finally, today kindergarten schools are more friendly and entertaining with children than they were before when grandparents were children. For example, today almost every kindergarten has a playground and playing instruments for children. Currently available resources for kindergarten children helps them easily learn things and studying has become more fun than it was before. Our grandparents used to have their pre-schooling at home and didn't have any fun activities while studying. They didn't enjoy studying that much.
In conclusion, while our grandparents enjoyed some benefits as children, the above three reasons clearly show that life today is much easier than life in the past.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 443, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...to have their pre-schooling at home and didnt have any fun activities while studying....
^^^^^
Line 7, column 494, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...any fun activities while studying. They didnt enjoy studying that much. In conclus...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86871886545 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3974730116 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241692046908 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08240358456 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657950509666 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150329892741 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310984632212 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 443, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...to have their pre-schooling at home and didnt have any fun activities while studying....
^^^^^
Line 7, column 494, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...any fun activities while studying. They didnt enjoy studying that much. In conclus...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86871886545 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3974730116 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241692046908 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08240358456 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657950509666 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150329892741 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310984632212 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.