Some people feel that advertising has negative effects on our society, because it encourages people to buy more unneeded items, while others feel that it is beneficial for our economy.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, advertising become a double-edged sword that impacting on human society. While it allows manufacturers can promote their products and make a profit, it can encourage wasteful consumption of goods. In my perspective, I would argue that the benefits of advertising may not outweigh its disadvantages.
On the one hand, advertising plays an important role in the global consumer economy, advertising bringing information about the new product from manufacturers to everybody in time. The wise consumer can make a comparison with other products on market and decide on their proper product. For example, it is never easier than clicking or searching on the internet, or finding on a magazine or social media, ect people can see all information including ingredients, origin or quality,.. As a result, thanks to advertising, the revenue of companies increases, through advertising the companies can reach the maximum number of potential customers, as well as create profitable companies, then reduce the price to meet the competition of the market.
- On the other hand, I believe that advertising may have a downside, it impacts directly the buying behavior of consumers. In fact, there are a lot of products that do not true as what is shown in advertising leading to appear of fake products. The consequence is that the consumers, especially children and the old buy poor quality products with up to the fair price or may not be useful or necessary, then those bad products will end up at landfill sites, representing a huge waste of resources.
In conclusion, I cannot deny the good function of advertising as the main driver of the economy. However, in my opinion, improper advertisements need controlling strictly due to their detrimental impacts on consumers and the whole community as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 480, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...including ingredients, origin or quality,.. As a result, thanks to advertising, th...
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Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ncluding ingredients, origin or quality,.. As a result, thanks to advertising, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18707482993 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1353751642 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4579489532 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886367267173 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033051624902 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183695454043 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052086925902 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00710419559592 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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