Some people think men and women have different natural abilities that make them suitable for different types of work. Others, however, believe that both men and women can be equally suited to do any type of work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is very controversial issue that whether women and men have different natural ability or not. There are many arguments supporting both views, those for and those against. Moreover, there are several evidence that prove some significant differences between male and female from genetic and natural habits approach.
On the one hand, it can not be overlooked that men and women have clear differences in physical appearance which make them suitable for different types of work. For example, a man can be a good mechanical engineer because he can work under tremendous pressure at factory and struggle with different kinds of problems as regards his job and interact with labors who might have violence behavior. While, in contrast, the woman who has a same job, can not handle all the problems and little by little she run into several mental problems at her workplace which impact on her life. Furthermore, several evidence shows that women who are psychologists are twice as success as men at the same positions since they are patience and good listener when people talk about their problems. Of course, it can not be forgotten that there are some exceptions in any fields.
On the other hand, these days, due to several economical problems, women have to work to earn money. They have to get job regardless their natural abilities which lead to situating to do any type of work. In some cases, women like experiencing different kinds of job that were banned for them in the past. For instance, they tend to work as a crane driver and the governments in several countries provide them with golden opportunity to get these kinds of jobs.
In conclusion, I believe that although there are several male and female who would be able to do any type of work equally; significant differences in natural abilities should be taken into consideration by government and people. I strongly agree with this view point that men and women should work in jobs which are relevant with their natural abilities.
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