In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday
Nowadays, it is believed that in the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. In this essay I completely agree with this statement because it has more merit rather than demerit for some reasons
In the 0ne hand, the main benefit every single person who decided take vacation in their country rather than other rural is make their government would gotten hudred income when everyone visited tourism attraction in their nation, it is because average place will be pay for tax to their council when visitor came for visited, for example in my hometown has ancient palace which is has history in the long time ago and everypeople should pay for entrance ticket when entered in that place include with tax for government as result make government has revenue from every enterance and then coucil can allocated their earns for built and maintenance public facilities in their region,
However there are some drowbacks of this problem, Firstly, usually people who rarely visiting other state don’t have new experince about atmosphere in other country, it is due to they never try to arrive in other nation, take as on example people who only fascinated with place in their country without find out about attraction in other country as result make people shock when in the future gone to other region. Secondly difficulty to accept diversity which is has in other region, it is because people who spend their leisure time only in the near location from their lives don’t understand about culture in other state, an other example my brother who arrived place wich is near from their job and seldom take vacation in other region nevertheless make they usually effortful to adaptaion in the new location which is the first time they arrived.
To sum up from where I stand, I believed that people should appreciate tourism attraction in their country with visiting that place, in my opinion while people explore unique place in their region people should increase their knowledge about other nation with visiting other country for compared environment in other nation with their own region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have gotten' or 'get'?
Suggestion: have gotten; get
...er rural is make their government would gotten hudred income when everyone visited tou...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...nderstand about culture in other state, an other example my brother who arrived place wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96944444444 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29504128638 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 90.0 20.2975951904 443% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 408.129498444 49.4020404114 826% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 447.25 106.682146367 419% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 90.0 20.7667163134 433% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.75 7.06120827912 407% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267934110836 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.283750481924 0.084324248473 336% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.291696297164 0.0667982634062 437% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212195574557 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168290674169 0.056905535591 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.0 13.0946893788 359% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.87 50.2224549098 -40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.4 11.3001002004 340% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.73 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.35 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.0 10.1190380762 376% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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