In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad no holiday
It is many offenders commit more crime after serving the punishment. In this essay I would examine the reason of many offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishment and how to deal with it before coming the reasonable conclusion
In the one hand there are some reason of many offenders commit more crime after the first punishment. Firstly the fiet punishment is not to severe which doesn't deter to them. It's due to first punishment too light for example violation of traffic which violated by they who don't use a helm get a penalty pay, that is penalty pay is too cheap. In this way doesn't defer to them and which do it again. Secondly punishment didn't record by government. It's important to record on data. For example the other countries apply a severe punishment and record it on their data civilitation, as a they don't commit more crime and obey the low
However, to tackle this problem firstly government have to apply severe punishment for offenders, for instance when offenders he punishment who don't commit again and afraid to commit crime. Secondly governments have to record of their civilization. In addition recorded is important to know how many times they disobey the rules. That is important to company which look for employee as an example when not offender apply the job seeker, they have a big chance than offenders
To sum up its evident increase punishment of their crimes and record the crime to their civilization
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... before coming the reasonable conclusion In the one hand there are some reason of...
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... fiet punishment is not to severe which doesnt deter to them. Its due to first punishm...
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...n of traffic which violated by they who dont use a helm get a penalty pay, that is p...
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...s penalty pay is too cheap. In this way doesnt defer to them and which do it again. Se...
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Suggestion: didn't
... which do it again. Secondly punishment didnt record by government. Its important to ...
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Suggestion: a; they
...ecord it on their data civilitation, as a they dont commit more crime and obey the low...
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...t on their data civilitation, as a they dont commit more crime and obey the low ...
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... dont commit more crime and obey the low However, to tackle this problem firstly ...
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Suggestion: don't
...stance when offenders he punishment who dont commit again and afraid to commit crime...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ave to record of their civilization. In addition recorded is important to know how many ...
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...r, they have a big chance than offenders To sum up its evident increase punishmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87148594378 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57905130249 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489959839357 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.706042671 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 110.272727273 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0513755147595 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208781127573 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232472304923 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415960810789 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196991607619 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... before coming the reasonable conclusion In the one hand there are some reason of...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... fiet punishment is not to severe which doesnt deter to them. Its due to first punishm...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n of traffic which violated by they who dont use a helm get a penalty pay, that is p...
^^^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s penalty pay is too cheap. In this way doesnt defer to them and which do it again. Se...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... which do it again. Secondly punishment didnt record by government. Its important to ...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'they'?
Suggestion: a; they
...ecord it on their data civilitation, as a they dont commit more crime and obey the low...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t on their data civilitation, as a they dont commit more crime and obey the low ...
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Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... dont commit more crime and obey the low However, to tackle this problem firstly ...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...stance when offenders he punishment who dont commit again and afraid to commit crime...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ave to record of their civilization. In addition recorded is important to know how many ...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, they have a big chance than offenders To sum up its evident increase punishmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87148594378 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57905130249 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489959839357 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.706042671 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 110.272727273 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0513755147595 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208781127573 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232472304923 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415960810789 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196991607619 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.