Last month you had a holiday overseas where ou stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday
Dear, my sweet friends
Hello friends ? How are you today ? I hope you always in good condisions. I can not forget my holiday in with you. It is so greate day. I writting this letter to say thanks for all your care.
Actually, in last month is my best holiday, because everyday i fell exciting. I really enjoy go to many new places with you. I have many good moment in my last holiday. I am happiness when i look my pictures with you, always make me remember the moment. Thanks to spend much your time to accompany me hangarround, and to send my photos with quickly. Sorry to not directly send message from you. Because after arrive in my home, i am so tired. So, I spend many time to take a rest.
Thanks to all my sweet friends, I hope in next holiday you will interesting come to my city. I will invite you to tour in my country. I sure you will be like to see my hometown.
Your Faithfully,
Sinthya
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...th is my best holiday, because everyday i fell exciting. I really enjoy go to man...
^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve many good moment in my last holiday. I am happiness when i look my pictures wi...
^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in my last holiday. I am happiness when i look my pictures with you, always make ...
^
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...otos with quickly. Sorry to not directly send message from you. Because after arr...
^^
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...m you. Because after arrive in my home, i am so tired. So, I spend many time to t...
^
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... in my home, i am so tired. So, I spend many time to take a rest. Thanks to all my swee...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...riends, I hope in next holiday you will interesting come to my city. I will invite you to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my hometown. Your Faithfully, Sinthya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22413793103 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35119513086 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3330569358 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 40.8333333333 76.5299724578 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.66666666667 16.8248392259 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250944111515 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897371702055 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609940545811 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151157008216 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688239373337 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.3 8.37731958763 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.72 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...th is my best holiday, because everyday i fell exciting. I really enjoy go to man...
^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve many good moment in my last holiday. I am happiness when i look my pictures wi...
^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in my last holiday. I am happiness when i look my pictures with you, always make ...
^
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...otos with quickly. Sorry to not directly send message from you. Because after arr...
^^
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...m you. Because after arrive in my home, i am so tired. So, I spend many time to t...
^
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... in my home, i am so tired. So, I spend many time to take a rest. Thanks to all my swee...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...riends, I hope in next holiday you will interesting come to my city. I will invite you to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my hometown. Your Faithfully, Sinthya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22413793103 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35119513086 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3330569358 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 40.8333333333 76.5299724578 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.66666666667 16.8248392259 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250944111515 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897371702055 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609940545811 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151157008216 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688239373337 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.3 8.37731958763 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.72 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.