Dear Max,
I wont make it to Canada on the 4th of February 2022 as planned. There is an event that just came up which I am going to attend and also play a part in.
You remember my younger sister Mary? Her long time boyfriend is planning a surprise engagement party for her on the 1st of February 2022. Since the both of them started dating, I’ve always been there for them in terms of giving relationship advice. My attendance is mandatory because you know I’m her only brother. Preparations are in place for the big day.
About the disappointment this has caused please accept my apologies. It’s not my fault that things turned out this way or that I disappointed you. I’d make it up to you once I come over to see you which is very soon. As my childhood friend please bear with me for the sake of our friendship.
The one year study leave I applied for starts on 1st March 2022. I’ll be able to visit you before I head to my school in Mexico that is going to resume on the 10th of March 2022. During the summer is also a good time to visit; schools won’t be in session then.
Can’t wait to see you.
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Max, I wont make it to Canada on the 4th of F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39252336449 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30816525989 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640186915888 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8291942859 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147504595525 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048046836142 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261364848395 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792839765646 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00988494350792 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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