Faced with such important environmental problems as today, many people believe that the best way to mitigate this trouble is to increase fuel prices. To a certain extent, I partly disagree with this idea.
On the one hand, people are often an important factor affecting all activities in life. Therefore, we should take measures to affect people to reduce problems instead of affecting external factors. Human activities which are one of the elements are the harmful effects of environmental issues. Focus on and attention to educating people about the environment will have more influence on decreasing environmental problems rather than rising the price of fuel. For example, the problem of traffic jams due to the increasing appearance of private vehicles such as cars, as most people think that owning a car is a symbol of wealth. Therefore, the increase in fuel prices does not affect them because they have enough money to pay for it.
However, an increase in fuel prices also partly reduces the negative side of some environmental problems such as heavy traffic congestion or air pollution. To be more specific, for people with a middle-class economy, the increase in fuel prices really affects them, they will tend to reduce the use of personal vehicles such as motorbikes and change to using public transport, leading to a decrease in the problem of traffic jams. In addition, vehicles such as motorbikes, cars, etc. when operating, they will emit a large amount of gas, which greatly affects the environment. Therefore, the increase in prices also contributes to the reduction of this toxic gas as emission because the action of using these transportations of people decreases.
In conclusion, although I disagree that an increase in fuel prices is not really can solve the environmental problem, we can focus on educating people to decline them more radically, it still can handle the issue in the short-term and hastily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he issue in the short-term and hastily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13924050633 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8297368555 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9045275941 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284280285528 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103017194374 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819338447924 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207876970412 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926854912026 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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