In this modern era, there are some drastic changes especially in matter of shopping products online has been observed. This has become some kind of revolution for the society. There are multiple merits as well as demerits for this type of pattern. In my perspective, the advantages obviously exceed the dis advantages. My reasons are justified further.
Today's generation is more about science and technology. People want to keep their self up to date as well as latest in terms of any topic. The major plus point about doing online surfing is they provide you good deals, latest offers which can save lot of your money as well as time. Moreover, many a time we don't have to go to their shops or offices. This can result in reservation of time , transportation barriers. In the recent time of Covid-19, all this facilities have been boosted and it has given tremendous outcomes in limiting the risk of this viral infection.
On the other hand it is beneficial for many vendors and shop keepers as well. They don't require any sort of place or go downs to keep their stuff. In today's time it is extremely difficult to posses one's own shop or land as their costs are increasing day by day. It is not everyone's cup of tea .Hence forth working from home for this kind of dealers ,businessmen is bliss.
It is said that every coin has two sides. This audacious response comes with lot of drawbacks too. People who are running successfully their own shops have seen major losses. Due to monetorization and lockdown consequences lots of growing and established business have to shut their premises which is ultimately going to hamper the lives of workers. Furthermore, it has been seen that cases of fraud and cheating are also pluming day by day. Still in our juridiction system we don't posses firm laws and penalties for this perjury.
To sum up, each and every latest tricks and hacks have their own values .Unless and until doing online shopping or booking tickets are helping ,not causing any damages they are the best introduced options which are available 24*7.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, well, kind of, sort of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76536312849 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53817158675 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583798882682 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1769190315 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5454545455 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130061295655 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358981682102 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294959131517 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724292469927 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250755459126 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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