Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
For a business to start and flourish in this competitive era it really depends on many factors such as Capital, Labor and land, but there is also government intervention in the business up to a certain extent. A business contributes a lot to an economy and it is the duty of the government to ensure that people can easily start their business without much compliance of statute. I mostly agree to this prompt as i believe that in order a small business to thrive government should play a minimal role in the private business matters but there should be restrictions on the business for the welfare of general people and society as a whole. It must be easy for a entrepreneur to start a business in an economy without much restrictions.
In America, the world's biggest economy , it is very easy for a entrepreneur to start a business only a fee of $35 is charged to open and as the result the economy of that country burgeoned.Even in India Government reduced the restrictions on businesses in 1991, the government abolished the license requirements even for a small industry and let the market policies play freely, the interference of bureaucrats in the private business matters were reduced and a result of these efforts the Indian economy flourished. This Low interference of the government also ensures public benefit in a sense that when people are free to open a business they earn and their living standards also starts to get better.
even compared to nations where people have to involve in too much red tap ism even to get a business registration these economies flourish. For example many nations of Europe still put restrictions on their people to open and run a business and these economies don't develop.An economy that is free from unnecessary compliance and restrictions always grow and provide more opportunities to the stakeholders to grow compared to an economy when government have a sharp eye on every business and tends to influence business decisions.
But that does not means that a there should not be any restrictions at all, in fact the government must impose restrictions up to some extent and interfere in private business matters up to the extent necessary for the welfare of people. anyone should not be allowed to sell the medicines or manufacture medicines , anything related to defense such as
arms and ammunition or should be allowed to take any activity freely that may be deleterious to general public. A complete laissez faire economy would lead to a problem for public as people may get involve into some dangerous activities and the repercussions would be lethal.Imagine in a fully capitalist economy people start selling drugs and the government don't interfere in this matters , this will surely result in the youth getting addicted to such intoxicants.
while this essay propounds a minimal restrictions on the business activities by the government where ever necessary and more liberty for a entrepreneur to run business and strongly advocates the need to protect the people from the disastrous effects of pure capitalist economy. government must let the people free to do whatever trade they want and let the best one survives the competition , this will be very helpful for small businesses to survive and flourish as they can concentrate more on the product and they will not be required to spend a lot on meeting compliance but such trades that can affect public should be watched carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, so, still, while, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2868.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 577.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9705372617 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90110439584 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92068568575 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.410745233969 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 935.1 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.362620013 60.3974514979 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.615384615 118.986275619 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.3846153846 23.4991977007 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23082419218 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107817554205 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792099487721 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136812477683 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671129199546 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 14.1392134831 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.8420337079 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.1743820225 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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