Some people think that it is good for our countries culture to import foreign movies and TV programs of. Other think that it is better to produce locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many individuals believe that imported cinema and television serials is better for our nation's culture whereas few thinks which are made in own country are good. This is because they can better learn about another country, on the other hand for economic growth and to portray the problems of country respectively.
Firstly, people tend to import foreign's cinema to better know about another culture. Cinemas and TV serials help a region to learn foreign traditions. This is helping nowadays many people to learn their languages as well. By importing media from other countries also create a better relationship among the both. For example, students who want to learn to speak in English see the Hollywood movies and dramas to be habitual to that language.
Secondly to grow economically and to show some difficulties facing by people of country it is important to generate it locally. In the making of a movie or TV serial 100 of people can get jobs and grows a financially. In addition the makers pay heavy text to government on the income of movies. Where
as cinema plays a crucial role in awaring the population about the problems faced by few categories of people. For example, a famous brand Being Human charities it's 90% of income from movies to help the people to grow economically and a famous TV serial generally based on transgender's community shows this struggle to survive and about their acceptance in their own family, but eventually after that serial views of people are now changed totally.
In conclusion, in my opinion, both the views have a numerous benefits to Nation's culture as because of better relation and to grow economically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98561151079 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68410893295 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4792544062 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304572906135 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100432664498 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682319068071 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161141904524 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570314177526 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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