Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message more popular .
• On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spend time writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take many time of people . When spoken communication is used too much , people don not have time to work or study. For example, if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are saved and everyone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to receive from my friend.
• On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually lazy when use written communication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have to use keyboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at coffee shop to write message.Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the relationship is more close .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meeting, i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- Some people believe that children are given too much free time They feel that this time should be used to do more school work How do you think children should spend their free time 56
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages 78
- The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary Yen from 1953 to 1983 and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period 79
- Some people think technology development decreases crime while others believe it actually encourages crimes Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You sho 56
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by...
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Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ay , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing ....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...lieved that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...able to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message more popular . ...
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...at using letter or message more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Suggestion: ,
...ge more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...ime writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take many time...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...irstly , Spoken communication can take many time of people . When spoken communication i...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mmunication can take many time of people . When spoken communication is used too m...
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...en spoken communication is used too much , people don not have time to work or stu...
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Suggestion: ,
... if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to cof...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...rs going to coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memor...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... going to coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with w...
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...o coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with wri...
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...coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with writt...
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...y save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing lett...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are save...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Example
...d and everyone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...veryone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk t...
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... free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r I used to receive from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable...
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... from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communi...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... communication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually...
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...ommunication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually l...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...s choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually lazy when use w...
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...mmunication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have ...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...yboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at scho...
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...pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I rea...
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...n fact , If I finish my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at co...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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...coffee shop to write message.Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to me...
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...d have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the r...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cation so the relationship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some r...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78521126761 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92880069402 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5048819783 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157320192685 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717900408957 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551384682332 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872925665716 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522684321916 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by...
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Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better t...
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Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing ....
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Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lieved that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , th...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to so...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to some extent ...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., this idea is reasonable to some extent , I would argue that using letter or mes...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...able to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message more popular . ...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...at using letter or message more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced...
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Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...g letter or message more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced that p...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ge more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spen...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...• On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spend time writing letter ...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take many tim...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ime writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take many time...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...irstly , Spoken communication can take many time of people . When spoken communication i...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mmunication can take many time of people . When spoken communication is used too m...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en spoken communication is used too much , people don not have time to work or stu...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to cof...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rs going to coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memor...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... going to coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with w...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with wri...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with writt...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing lett...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are save...
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Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Example
...d and everyone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...veryone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk t...
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Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to re...
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Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r I used to receive from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communi...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... communication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...ommunication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually l...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually lazy when use w...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mmunication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have ...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...yboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at scho...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I rea...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...n to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I reall...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n fact , If I finish my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at co...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... friend at coffee shop to write message.Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to ...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...coffee shop to write message.Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to me...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ffee shop to write message.Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to meet ...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the r...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cation so the relationship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some r...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78521126761 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92880069402 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5048819783 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157320192685 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717900408957 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551384682332 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872925665716 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522684321916 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.