These Day , it is believed that children should not spend a lot of time on using smartphones . Although this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that children abuse their cellphones .
On the one hand , i am convinced that children should own a smartphone and use it for some purpose . Firstly , Mobile phones have important functions for the development of children.Student can easily search information and knowledge when have a trouble about homework , therefore they could receive assistance which can help them achieve many good results . Secondly , Parents can comfortably keep in touch with their children . The safeness of children often be a nervousness of parents when they away form us, therefore the connection among us is extremely important. Additionally , the communication between parents and teachers of children would control student which make them be better .
On the other hand , it is understandable why the smartphones addiction have to be stopped.
On top of that , cellphones take so much time of children . Smartphones have many types of leisure which make children could focus on it all day . For examples : games or platforms of socialmedia which own many attraction to young people . Children easily forget their learning and nervousness about their exercise.Futhermore , many diverse categories of leisure on smartphones make children happy without relationships , therefore they don not need make friends so smartphones reduce social communication of young people . Finally , cellphones cause many diseases about eyes such as blindness , low vision which reduce the quality of life of patient. At present , i am suffering low vision after five years use smartphones.
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support children should not spend a lot of time on their smartphones , i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024 67
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...can help them achieve many good results . Secondly , Parents can comfortably keep...
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...hem achieve many good results . Secondly , Parents can comfortably keep in touch w...
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...rtably keep in touch with their children . The safeness of children often be a ner...
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...eir children . The safeness of children often be a nervousness of parents when they away...
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... us is extremely important. Additionally , the communication between parents and t...
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...ontrol student which make them be better . On the other hand , it is understand...
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...ke them be better . On the other hand , it is understandable why the smartphone...
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...cellphones take so much time of children . Smartphones have many types of leisure ...
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... make children could focus on it all day . For examples : games or platforms of s...
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Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
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...s or platforms of socialmedia which own many attraction to young people . Children easily forge...
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...hich own many attraction to young people . Children easily forget their learning a...
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...ake children happy without relationships , therefore they don not need make friend...
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...uce social communication of young people . Finally , cellphones cause many disease...
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...ny diseases about eyes such as blindness , low vision which reduce the quality of ...
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...e quality of life of patient. At present , i am suffering low vision after five ye...
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...uality of life of patient. At present , i am suffering low vision after five year...
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...years use smartphones. In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40863787375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12975396874 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1643764896 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220864549381 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791215246639 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642196616908 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146267357107 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699648951488 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
These Day , it is believed that children should n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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These Day , it is believed that children should not ...
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...spend a lot of time on using smartphones . Although this idea is reasonable to som...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that children abuse their...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...his idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that children abuse their c...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...gue that children abuse their cellphones . On the one hand , i am convinced tha...
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...se their cellphones . On the one hand , i am convinced that children should own...
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...their cellphones . On the one hand , i am convinced that children should own a...
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...a smartphone and use it for some purpose . Firstly , Mobile phones have important ...
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...ne and use it for some purpose . Firstly , Mobile phones have important functions ...
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... important functions for the development of children.Student can easily search in...
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Suggestion: Student
...ctions for the development of children.Student can easily search information and knowl...
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...ledge when have a trouble about homework , therefore they could receive assistanc...
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Suggestion: ,
...edge when have a trouble about homework , therefore they could receive assistance...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... they could receive assistance which can help them achieve many good results . Se...
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...can help them achieve many good results . Secondly , Parents can comfortably keep...
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...hem achieve many good results . Secondly , Parents can comfortably keep in touch w...
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...rtably keep in touch with their children . The safeness of children often be a ner...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be often
...eir children . The safeness of children often be a nervousness of parents when they away...
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... us is extremely important. Additionally , the communication between parents and t...
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...ontrol student which make them be better . On the other hand , it is understand...
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...ke them be better . On the other hand , it is understandable why the smartphone...
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...tion have to be stopped. On top of that , cellphones take so much time of childre...
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...cellphones take so much time of children . Smartphones have many types of leisure ...
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... make children could focus on it all day . For examples : games or platforms of s...
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...make children could focus on it all day . For examples : games or platforms of so...
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Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun attraction seems to be countable; consider using: 'many attractions'.
Suggestion: many attractions
...s or platforms of socialmedia which own many attraction to young people . Children easily forge...
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Line 6, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...hich own many attraction to young people . Children easily forget their learning a...
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Suggestion: Futhermore
...ng and nervousness about their exercise.Futhermore , many diverse categories of leisure on...
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...vousness about their exercise.Futhermore , many diverse categories of leisure on s...
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...ake children happy without relationships , therefore they don not need make friend...
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...therefore they don not need make friends so smartphones reduce social communicati...
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...uce social communication of young people . Finally , cellphones cause many disease...
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... communication of young people . Finally , cellphones cause many diseases about ey...
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...ny diseases about eyes such as blindness , low vision which reduce the quality of ...
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...e quality of life of patient. At present , i am suffering low vision after five ye...
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...uality of life of patient. At present , i am suffering low vision after five year...
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Suggestion: ,
...years use smartphones. In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support ch...
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Line 8, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...spend a lot of time on their smartphones , i strongly believe that this policy is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40863787375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12975396874 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1643764896 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220864549381 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791215246639 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642196616908 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146267357107 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699648951488 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.