These days , it is believed that children should spend more time on studying . Although this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that student should be given too much free time .
On the one hand , i am convinced that students need to have free time . Firstly , the study at school is extremely difficult so student are suffered nervousness and pressure which make them quite tired . Accordingly , they need to have relaxations which improve their emotion and advance their confidence after learning at school .Secondly , children should be learned things without knowledge at school which have an important function to the development of children . For example , Swimming or skills which would bring assistances for student in the future .
On the other hand , It is understandable why children have to spend more time on school . On top of that , the majority of student are quite lazy so they need an encouragement from teacher to learn more efficiency .When students don not have their teachers beside , they often play games or watch movie instead of learning . Therefore, they must stay at school longer to get more achievements . Furthermore , Children often have a good behaviour if they stay at school because the appearance of rules in school make them behave carefully . In addition to , Parents could focus on working when their children stay at school because they don not worry about the study and safeness of their children
In conclusion , There may be some reasons to support children need to spend more time on school . I strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06617647059 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67782468982 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3228665198 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379493894561 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160113236934 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117287340705 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291519878045 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125184581372 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.