he tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables illustrate the temperatures and hours of sunshine in London and Sydney during the similar weekend in december 2018.
Overall , It is clear that the temperatures of London was highest on saturday 29th and was lowest at the same day. Additionally , the temperatures of Sydney was top the list on sunday 30th , while the bottom position belongs to the temperatures on friday 28th.
The max temperatures of London was highest on saturday 29th , at 13 , while the max temperatures of London on friday 28th and sunday 30th were 9 and 10 respectively. The min temperatures of London was lowest on saturday 29th , at 3, while the min temperatures of London on friday 28th and sunday 30th were 4 and 5 respectively.
The max temperatures of Sydney was highest on sunday 30th , at 31 , while the max temperatures of Sydney on friday 28th and saturday 29th were 26 and 28 respectively. The min temperatures of Sydney was lowest on Friday 28th , at 17, while the min temperatures of Sydney on Saturday 29th and sunday 30th were 18 and 19 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: was the lowest
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sunday 30th were 4 and 5 respectively. The max temperatures of Sydney was highest ...
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...urday 29th were 26 and 28 respectively. The min temperatures of Sydney was lowest o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82777777778 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05233688328 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 60.0 106.607317073 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.333333333333 0.547539520022 61% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.579247656 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155126558613 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121070670666 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930953663574 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15935764904 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109596142072 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.