In some countries, grandparents often live with their grandchildren under
the same roof.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for the grandchildren?
There is a prevalent phenomenon in some countries that say grandpa and grandma live with their grandchildren together. This case has it's own pros and cons that i try to point out some of them.
Living with aged people always has some special joys and benefits. Firstly, attending to their unique experiences should be always audible. They always talk intensively about their journeys and share them generously with younger generations. Secondly spending time with at least one of a silent generation definitely will help you to make a strong relationship with all other family members meanwhile, those families who have better community, also have better mental condition and finally I would like to mention emotional support from grandparents which play a important role in our life progression, for instance younger members always have a unconscious sense of having a reliable back and could act more efficiently.
In another hand sharing your life with older people can be sometimes kind of annoying because of their general health condition, for example they are specifically slower that normal human beat and also if you wanted to experience independent life, you would separate from your supportive family members because they always have an eye on you and your private life. As the last drawback item which i reluctant to talk about, I would say you have to take care of them 24/7 for their health issues. In that age the elderly has their own problems and sometimes it takes all your day to fix them specially those who have disabilities.
In conclusion I would talk about being around your old relatives has own pleasure and difficulties at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68103211605 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.689713241 49.4020404114 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.2 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172064399526 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839229717809 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802091948642 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11895110685 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925323666553 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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