Nowadays, money is a preferable option instead of buying things when considering gifting an individual. There are many people who prefer giving money as gifts rather than buying some items. In the essay I will discuss how sending cash will save time and stress, the satisfaction the recipient gets because of gifts sent as money, and how this act has become a positive trend.
One of the reasons of sending cash rather than sending gifts is the time and stress it would save the sender. For instance, whenever I want to send birthday gifts to my niece in Canada, I always put into consideration the time and stress involved in sending items which makes me send money as her gift. Clearly, considering time and stress is a key reason of sending money as gifts.
Further, another reason why monetary gifting is more preferable to individuals than buying items is the satisfaction the receivers have knowing that they can do whatever they want with the money and whenever they choose to do it. For example, I have an issue with my deep freezer and someone sends a gift to me as cash, once I receive it, it will be used to repair my fridge. Clearly, considering the satisfaction the recipients have is another key reason of sending money as gifts.
This act is a positive trend because a lot of people see it as a very conducive means of gifting.
In conclusion, this essay I discussed showed how sending cash will save time and stress, the satisfaction the recipient gets because of gifts sent as money, and how this act has become a positive trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
...ot of people see it as a very conducive means of gifting. In conclusion, this ess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6897810219 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54145919994 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463503649635 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9850083297 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.818181818 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323095212689 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136888455069 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781572462589 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180607274664 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057273006412 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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