More and more people give money as a gift rather than buy some items. What is the reason for this? Is it a negative or positive trend?
Currently, financial gifts have become more appreciated than various items due to their universality. While such presents may show a lack of interest in another person’s life, I do believe that it is a positive tendency as it may help a giftee to purchase a long-awaited thing.
To begin with, the reasons that stand behind the tendency of presenting money are likely to be its universality as a gift as well as an issue with finding a suitable item for a person. Firstly, gifting money might be suitable for any person regardless of sex or age. Moreover, due to this feature, a gifter gives money as a present unless they know the giftee’s preferences, which solves the problem of searching for an appropriate gift. For instance, it might be more convenient to receive money instead of a useless figurine or another bottle of not your favorite perfume.
Going further, monetary gifts could show less involvement in another person’s life. What I mean is that giving money may be considered as a lack of interest in preparing a present that a person wants to receive or just knowing their desires. Nevertheless, I am convinced that it still could be helpful for a giftee to gather finances for something more expensive and valuable for them. As an example, such a present to your friend may help them to book a long-awaited vacation to Bali or buy a new car. Thus, money would be more preferable for almost anyone in the sense that people tend to have secret desires.
To conclude, nowadays giving money as a gift has become more popular than giving any items. Gifting money could be considered as a lowered concern about giftee, nevertheless, I am certain that in such a way some people may lessen the risk of giving the unwanted gift as well as receivers may be generally more thankful receiving money which may be valued by them even more.
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Comments
I think this is a positive…
I think this is a positive trend. But in my opinion, it's mainly based on the type of relationship you have with a person that you give them money as a gift instead of an item. It is also good to know that we live in a society that money has the ability to buy most things. I recently won a lot of money at an online casino in Ireland and I can buy anything I want. Money has a huge influence, but for me, items are more important than money.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, i mean, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76708074534 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73548898102 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527950310559 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.017357881 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342192698566 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127592067221 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706753509519 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210543224873 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550796603028 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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