In this day and age, the population in the city is increasingly growing; therefore, it's evident that people in the city live in small areas having no outdoor areas. From my point of view, that state has resulted in adverse development.
First of all, small or no outdoor areas prevent people from entertaining outdoor activities that can help children grow up healthily. The way our children are kept "trapped" in their own house in view of the lack of playing ground may lead to video game addiction or something like that. We all know once they get hooked on video games or the Internet they can't get out and make themself isolated from society.
Next, tiny houses significantly affect residents' health. Living in such a small house can make people suffer from many illnesses related to respiratory tract or even mental health. Small houses without outdoor areas hold residents back from doing exercises, which is considered a healthy activity and is highly recommended by doctors and many experts to stay healthy.
In conclusion, it's a widespread belief that living in a home with small or no outdoor areas is a negative development and people should change their attitudes toward living in the city, instead, they should consider living in the countryside. Therefore, problems will be solved, the population in areas in the Earth will be balanced if we do so.
- Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through internet and they can study just as well at home To what extent do agree or disagree 89
- With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas Is it a positive or negative development 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98695652174 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78243545656 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.473707702 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.7 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304496693868 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104650150732 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11982537085 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18059605896 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895974544113 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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