The two pie charts compare the proportion of time that adult workers spent on six different daily activities in a specific nation in 1958 and 2008.
Looking from an overall perspective, it can be observed from both pie charts that working adults spent most of their time per day going to work and sleeping. In addition, the proportion of time those workers hung out with their friends or families decreased significantly from 1958 to 2008.
Beginning with the 1958 pie chart, we can easily notice that adult workers had to spend most of their time going to work and sleeping, each of these activities made up about 33% of the mentioned pie chart. Besides, during this time, working adults spent about 19% of their time each day going out with their friends or families. Meanwhile, the figures for other interests or sports, relaxing at home, and traveling to work were very low, at 6%, 8%, and 2% respectively.
Turning to the second pie chart, it can be seen that adult workers spent much lesser time with their friends and their families as this figure dropped dramatically from 19% in 1958 to only 6% in 2008. In contrast, 2008 witnessed rises in terms of activities such as resting at home (increased by 5%), going to work (raised by 6%), and participating in sports or other hobbies (increased by 2%). Finally, adult workers still have to spend most of their time per day at their workplaces and sleeping. The percentage of time for work increased by 11% from 33% in 1958 to 42% in 2008, while the figure for sleeping decreased by 7% from 32% in 1958 to 25% in 2008.
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne Australia over a two week period in 2013 78
- The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008 67
- The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban rural and town between 1995 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting this main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, look, second, still, while, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 279.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64516129032 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45886495777 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476702508961 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.9188032357 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.6 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342693685019 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161167867196 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857744841425 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263811624918 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565046457931 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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