The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011

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The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.

The two pie charts compare the differences in the proportions of eight types of waste disposal in a nation in 1960 and 2011.

Looking from an overall perspective, it can be seen that after 51 years, people threw away fewer papers, textiles, and other types of waste, while the remaining waste experienced an increase in the proportion of waste disposal. In addition, disposed metal, glass, and green waste shared almost the same percentage in the two mentioned years.

According to the charts, the rate of textiles being disposed of in 1960 was 17%, however, this figure dropped by 6% to 11% in 2011. The respective discard rates of paper and other types of waste in 1960 were 25% and 9%. After 51 years, these figures fell to 15% and 4%, respectively. The proportion of green waste and glass waste in 1960 remained unchanged when compared to that in 2011. Besides, metal waste only witnessed a minor increase of 1% from 8% in 1960 to 9% in 2011.

Turning to the remained waste, which experienced some significant increases in terms of waste disposal rate. The amount of food being wasted accounted for 12% in 1960 and raised dramatically to 21% in 2011. People in 2011 also discarded twice the amount of wood compared to the other year, with the disposal rate increasing twofold from 4% in 1960 to 8% in 2011. Finally, the figure for plastic waste grew by 10% from 8% in 1960 to 18% in 2011.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, look, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51773691319 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518218623482 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1518191848 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313823840151 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138930087989 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844866682813 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236774357821 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933063579227 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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