The rendered process chart depicts information about the process electricity generation in a wind power plant. The whole process is divided into nine steps.
Thus, from an overall analysis the process of generating electricity starts with wind and ends with switchyard. Every step is crucial and critical for the generation of electricity in wind turbine. If any step is excluded whole process will be halted.
At first glance it can be clearly seen from diagram the process of generating electricity starts with wind, when wind high speed wind forces rotor blades they starts to move. In the following step the gear box and generator is situated in nacelle chamber. With the help of gear box generator starts to run. After that generator sends electricity with the help of long power cables to transformer. These cables are located in tower.
Moving towards further details when Transformer receive high voltage electricity it transfer it them to switchyard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eration of electricity in wind turbine. If any step is excluded whole process will...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...igh speed wind forces rotor blades they starts to move. In the following step the gear...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lp of gear box generator starts to run. After that generator sends electricity with t...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'transfers'?
Suggestion: transfers
...mer receive high voltage electricity it transfer it them to switchyard.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25161290323 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65463292426 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8493594191 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0729582864527 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301498553913 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358701106579 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424596055652 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250219512003 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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