Dear Sir / Madam,
I hope you are doing well,
I am sending this Email regarding the part-time job opening you posted a few days ago. I like to apply for this position. As a student, I have to focus mostly on my studies, while part-time employment can cover a considerable portion of my expenses. Below, I will explain why I am a suitable candidate for this position.
In luxury restaurants like yours, experienced employees who know have to behave well with customers are assets. Fortunately, I have a couple of years of experience working in top-notch restaurants in my home countries, and I believe I will fit well in the position's requirements. Please find my resume attached for more details.
As a student, I have quite a flexible schedule. Indeed, I have some courses during the week that I must attend. However, all of them are in the morning, and there should not be any interference with the restaurant's working time.
If you require any further information, feel free to contact me.
Yours faithfully,
Masoud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l free to contact me. Yours faithfully, Masoud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86857142857 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94454163041 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662857142857 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2605157415 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266547356958 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800354626705 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043087032603 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127751766764 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240078280612 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.