If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?۱٫ Find a roommate to share a room۲٫ Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less frequently۳٫ B

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If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?

۱٫ Find a roommate to share a room

۲٫ Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less frequently

۳٫ Buy cheap foods and cook home (do not often eat outside)

Nowadays, because of tough economic conditions, most people are looking for a solution to decrease their expenses. In my opinion, it would better if my friend buys cheap food and cook at home because the price of food has a great influence on the costs of each person. Moreover, eating outside may cause some health problems for him that need additional costs for him. I would illustrate my reasons in the following paragraphs.

First of all, a great proportion of the costs of each person belongs to the costs of food. In other words, restaurants have to sell their foods at a much higher price because they should pay for the rent, salary, insurance, advertising, etc. Thus, by eating outside you would waste a lot of money that it is not the real value of your food and would be enough for fulfilling your other requirements like buying a new mobile phone or paying your rent. For example, when I was a student at university, I used to cook my food at home. Once, at the end of the semester, I decided to eat outside and allocate more time to reading for the exams. Surprisingly, the food prices were too high that led me to spend all the money that I had saved during the semester. Therefore, when I compared the price of my meals in restaurants with the cost of cooking them at home, I realized that should I cooked my meals at home, I could buy a new mobile phone with my money.

As the second reason, eating outside may cause some serious health problems for you that lead you to spend lots of money to get your health back. On the contrary, the two other options don’t have any negative effects on your health. For sure, making more profit, restaurants may use too much oil and salt to attract customers or they may cook their foods with low-quality ingredients that would affect people’s health negatively. For instance, I have a friend who used to eat fast foods like pizza. Someday, when he went to a doctor for his stomach pain, after some medical test, the doctor told him that his pain is because of a serious problem in his digestive system. Indeed, not only he had to tolerate the long course of treatment but also he had to spend lots of money to cure himself. Even, he had to share his home with someone else to save some money for his treatment.

Based on the aforementioned reasons, it can be concluded that not only cooking at home will cost less but also it would much healthier than restaurant foods.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52714932127 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46720572154 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502262443439 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5816503251 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.315789474 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2631578947 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128587951618 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419473805028 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448619369227 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766969037615 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260705104876 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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