In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.
It is true that people in all over the world may expect to live longer than ever before. This trend leads to some negative and positive impact on our societies. However, I believe that the pros overweigh the cons.
As we live longer and the populations of countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. One issue is that there will be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. However, these adverse impacts just occur in a few countries.
On the other hand, changing demographic bring in advantages in terms of lasting happiness and looking after families. Living longer gives us more opportunities to enjoy recreational activities or to do whatever we want. We can travel to new destinations and get involved in a wide range of hobbies which was impossible while working and bringing up a family. Furthermore, those with grandchildren can have time to help young, busy parents with such tasks as collecting kids from school or even share experiences with the younger generation.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages caused by changing demographics, I am of the opinion that this trend still affect us on many positive aspects.
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinions 56
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion 56
- In many countries life expectancy is increasing Discuss the disadvantages and advantages of this trend and give your own idea 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, may, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07083333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87297936238 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8369372158 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6153846154 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901179917803 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286866750974 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401768888754 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654795825666 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495375818544 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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