In human life, taking risks is inevitable because it is believed to be a barrier that needs to be overcome in order to achieve desired outcomes. Hence, it is crucial for people to gamble not only in their professional aspects but also in their private lives. In my opinion, everything has its own pros and cons, and taking risks is no exception.
On the one hand, being willing to take risks will pave the way for many opportunities that can unleash an individual’s whole potential or change their lives positively. For instance, an excellent accountant will never get a higher position in the organization if he is afraid to gamble for the better. In addition, providing that he has the gut to take risks, a new horizon will be widely opened in terms of higher position chances. This is also appropriate for an individual’s personal life, a person won’t know how lucky he is when playing a lottery. Hence, he could become a wealthy person immediately or stay in poverty.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks when taking risks the wrong way. To make it more clear, taking risks could bring people 50 percent of success and failure. Hence, if fortune is not likely to happen, they are going to endure consequences that cannot be resolved easily. For example, job hopping is good for employees who eagle to earn professional experience or a better-paid job, however, if the new organization they are going to work in is not as good as the previous one, they will regret it for the rest of their lives. In terms of personal lives, marriage is a huge gamble that everyone has to undergo in their lifetimes. many people admit that they feel a sense of remorse after having married a partner because they have to sacrifice many things such as their salaries, taking care of children, or even losing chances for a greater job.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that being willing to take risks could strengthen a person's experiences and create precious opportunities in many contexts of life. However, it also means he will need to pay a price that may be unpleasant or sometimes regretful.
- These days mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 11
- Some educationalists argue that non exam art based subjects such as music drama art and craft should be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance To what extent 89
- In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 84
- Psychologists have known for many years that color can affect how people feel For this reason attention should be given to color schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals How true is this How far does color influence people s health a 73
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...yone has to undergo in their lifetimes. many people admit that they feel a sense of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78082191781 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71666182185 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53698630137 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9553367877 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304729459995 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100923042166 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638935615861 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18925386074 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639158477264 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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