After completing high school, students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university.
In modern days, it appears to some that due to the highly rapid development of technology, unprecedentedly diverse information flood into our mind and we are pushed forward without taking a breath, thus, gap year is reasonable. Others maintain a conservative view that high school graduates should get into university seamlessly. Both of these ideas have their bases, they need to be scrutinized meticulously, in my opinion, taking some time off before college is necessary.
First of all, from a school official perspective, one or more years' intervals provide an opportunity to gain more suitable applicants rather than haphazard ones. For example, students went through one-year deliberation, may apply for majors which match their interests, aspirations, work experience, and budgets. Yet those who are just out of high school may only think about grades without poring over all categories, even pick blindly under a sense of urgency.
Moreover, from a student perspective, juveniles after graduating are utterly ignorant about how and where to step forward, they need thinking time. For instance, my cousin Jason chose to gap for one year because his high school is a highly and purely competitive place where he can only focus on textbooks and grades and only have a vague silhouette of future stuff. During the interval, he traveled to four countries and uncountable tourist attractions. Those exotic and aesthetic historical sites and natural scenery touches the deep of his heart. After returning he mapped out all colleges containing Art History majors and submitted his applications. Lastly, not only did he get accepted but also scraped tuition up from part-time jobs during that year.
A voice rises that young people should not waste time on meaningless wandering, gap year is another excuse for procrastination. However, without relaxing in moderation, a tense string will eventually get snapped. Hit the pause to consider what we truly require will form a better mindset and a healthier coping mechanism to level up our compatibility.
Therefore, thinking out of the box, and gaining passion and vigor may be a wiser choice to shape our future. Life is short, but twenty-somethings have nothing but time, trial and error is the only weapon against irreversible regret. While there are one thousand Hamlets in one thousand people's eyes, I think my opponents will compromise after reading my article.
- Providing Internet access is just as important as other services such as building roads so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost 90
- Technology internet has made children less creative than they were in the past It has more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave 90
- Grades marks encourage students to learn 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another 90
- Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don t know for example by giving clothing and food to people who need them than they were in the past 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3038961039 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91280375312 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9963990107 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174269869847 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467821905757 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408473826733 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861058045039 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579280333594 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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