The official authorities should provide access to early education at no cost to the children’s guardians. Preschool helps children develop social, pre-academic, and general life skills that will aid them in their future studies. I agree that the provision of free early education should be implemented in every place in order to relieve stress from the economic crisis, encourage both children and their parents, and eradicate social problems.
To begin with, people are suffering from an economic crisis due to a sudden pandemic and inflation. Prices in every sector are rising at an alarming rate. Most people nowadays have difficulty even fulfilling their basic needs. In this condition, where everything is expensive, people surely find it hard to pay for the early education of their children. For instance, during the COVID pandemic, many people had to quit their jobs, which really affected the economic condition of numerous people. In such circumstances, people really struggle to afford the education of their children. As a result, many children weren’t able to acquire an early education. If it was provided without charge, those children could have gained pre-academic knowledge. It would provide relief for parents and encourage children to learn.
Furthermore, it helps in the eradication of many problems in our society. When all children receive free pre-education, they will all participate in learning. It will likely warn them to avoid getting involved in bad activities. However, if there is a mandatory fee to pay for it, all of them may not be able to receive it. It will really have a huge impact on a community. Drawing from my own experience, I have seen small kids in my community who don’t have access to preschool. Their mindsets are really different than others'. I can say that due to their brotherhood with bad people, they start to smoke, bully, and even steal others' valuable items. Such kids will become threats to society if they are not assisted in the right direction. Education is the most important factor that can help them walk down the right path. It's easy to see why children should be given free pre-education to help them solve such problems.
To conclude, it can be inferred that pre-education should be supplied without charge by the concerned officials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1373.03311258 141% => OK
No of words: 377.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1299734748 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77067606623 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 145.348785872 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564986737401 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 419.366225166 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5717601117 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5833333333 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7083333333 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45833333333 7.06452816374 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 4.45695364238 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232046799432 0.272083759551 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650603566442 0.0996497079465 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683688242929 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137249455692 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766211121024 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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