it is said that who pursue and continue with a particular career choice early in life are more likely to experience greater fulfilment in regards to their work than those who tend to switch jobs more regularly. In my opinion, career satisfactions is not determined by when someone chooses a career path or for how long someone pursues it. This essay will outline some important factors believed to be involved.
In the term of choosing and pursuing a career path in a long period of time can beneficial in several ways. Firstly, starting a career early can provide someone with a better financial situation later in life, and hence greater satisfaction. Furthermore, remaining a career path is able to enable employees to have more opportunitie to advance to the top of their chosen profession through promotion, which may also possibly lead to greater career fulfilment.
On the other hand, those who change jobs or career paths more regularly may experience many advantages.For example, some people's personalities are not suitable for long periods of time, and they may need to change different kind of jobs to prioritise satisfaction themselves.In addtion to this, it can be an overwhelming decission for young people without much real experience, and therefore exploring a range of fields early on may lead to finding a career that will be more suitable for them in the long term.
In conclusion, candidates who just express their characteristics when finding a job the most suitable and make them feel optimistic.And I also hold fast to the belief that pursuing a career path in a long term or challenging self in range of fields may lead to the best productivity and have a sense of job satisfaction later in life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96885813149 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96227724989 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.208422555 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.5 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.125 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.875 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26578994796 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110968311605 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810249408432 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167228234193 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527238015876 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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