It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on
people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people claimed that helping needy people all around the world would be an impossible ideal, and therefore the authority should only pay attention to the people in their own countries. From my perspective, I totally agree with this view, described in the following essay before the conclusion is reached.
There are numerous reasons why a number of people believe that the government should make their dwellers a top priority. Firstly, the authority could not handle all problems in the world. In other words, there are plenty of citizens on this planet who look for help. Thus, in order to have an excellent result, the government ought to allocate the national budget to the countryside, which would be better spent on the improvement of road infrastructure and public services. This positively affects a decrease in poverty and crime rates.
In addition, it is the government’s responsibility to ensure that its citizens have access to basic education and healthcare. instead of offering financial support to aid other countries, providing free education and other essential public services would lift its citizens out of illiteracy. This would contribute to sustainable development in the future.
However, if their people have improved their living standards, helping other countries that they do not have the ability to address their own issues would allow each country to become more united.
in conclusion, although helping other individuals is a good thing to do, I personally believe that the rescue process ought to start from our own country before others
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32669322709 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80415263699 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8507473427 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300234081329 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917341911372 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111813597037 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163298729407 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106191333642 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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