If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study what would you choose Explain your choice using specific reasons and details

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To find opportunity to study in a choice able subject is very luck a...
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...d opportunity to study in a choice able subject is very luck able incidences I...
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...a choice able subject is very luck able incidences If I were found that type of...
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...e subject is very luck able incidences If I were found that type of opportunity...
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... I were found that type of opportunity I would chose medicinal biotechnology I c...
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...found that type of opportunity I would chose medicinal biotechnology I choose this ...
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...y I would chose medicinal biotechnology I choose this subject due to several rea...
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...oose this subject due to several reasons I will develop my idea in the subsequent...
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... idea in the subsequent paragraphs To begin with one of the reasons for my cho...
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...bject is that it has various application By taking knowledge from this subject on...
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...n contribute to different aspect of life The subject medicinal biotechnology teac...
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...o use the medicine through biotechnology It has less side effect and more selecti...
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...ss side effect and more selective action I have to admit my opinion on this matte...
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...oundly influenced by my personal example I remember when I read in university my...
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...enced by my personal example I remember when I read in university my one of my f...
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...e subject for his higher study he chosed medicinal biotechnology When I asked hi...
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...study he chosed medicinal biotechnology When I asked him about the chosing this ...
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...asked him about the chosing this subject he said that in future almost all medici...
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... he said that the knowledge of medicinal biotechnology helps a doctor to treat a...
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...he knowledge of medicinal biotechnology helps a doctor to treat a patient more ...
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...ology helps a doctor to treat a patient more easily and selectively So it was v...
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...t a patient more easily and selectively So it was very important for me to chose...
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...ucrable opportunity to find handsome job My personal example is a compelling ill...
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...job My personal example is a compelling illustration of this I remember when I r...
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... college I regularly submitted different scientific articles to different renown...
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...egularly submitted different scientific articles to different renown journals an...
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...ead different articles from the journals I found in one of the article that in US...
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...ifferent pharmaceutical companies seeked the employees whose have the knowledge o...
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...f medicinal biotechnology and they paid those person a noticeable salary My one of my elder...
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...ey paid those person a noticeable salary My one of my elder cousin applied for th...
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... of my elder cousin applied for that job and found the job with very high salary ...
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... and found the job with very high salary If he had not the knowledge of medicinal...
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...the knowledge of medicinal biotechnology he would have never found that type of j...
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... would have never found that type of job It is clear to see that to find a job wi...
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...biotechnology is very attractive subject Because it helps to earn high salary and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8842364532 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96109210289 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42118226601 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 406.0 20.1344086022 2016% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1983.0 100.406767564 1975% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 406.0 20.6045352989 1970% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.0 5.45110844103 844% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11862790722 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11862790722 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948387403739 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593782820869 0.0645574589148 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 204.6 11.7677419355 1739% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -340.61 58.1214874552 -586% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 161.6 10.1575268817 1591% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.5 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.46 8.01818996416 330% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 10.002688172 600% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 164.4 10.0537634409 1635% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

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